Environmentalists have been warning us for many years and i can see the new world since i was born because my father told me about some places that disappeared. I think everything happens because the humanity and the new factories with all the technology, this change dramatically the effects on the environment.
In my opinion everybody now a day is using a lot of mobile phone and a lot of new machines that make easily people’s life. Firstly the batteries are made with dangerous chemicals and a part of that they need a lot of time to degrade. As a result this will lead to changes in the climate, water pollution, and tranquillity of the people is increasingly more affected indirectly.
Finally is the destruction of our natural environment taking as a result we all live in places increasingly artificial.
I believe urgent action is needed to protect the environment and our world which is our home.
Cande please look at 59 and do the essay again. It should have 4 paragraphs, with a topic sentence as well as linking phrases each. For linking words look at the chart. The conclusion should be similar to the introduccion, restating your opinion, also the phrase "the environment we live in will change dramatically in the next 50 years" has to be included in the intro.The essay should also have between 120 to 180 words.
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